Assignment 3-4 Part 1

I like the content of my essay; I think my thesis statement really could create an argument that the people pictured in the comic panels clearly depict inequality.  My transition from paragraph to paragraph is not smooth.  I really need to work on that area of writing.  Please provide some techniques in making a smooth transition.  My essay provides many quotes and references from the comic, but they come across cluttered.  These quotes and references validates my argument.  Can you identify my thesis statement?