I plan to reread my essay to get a better understanding on reorganizing my paragaphs. My essay contains several quoted ( which I like), because they give my argument validity. On the other hand, I have to separate them to prevent them from looking and sounding like run on sentences. These quotes can be revised by spreading them through the paper.
My Peer Review provided me with some good feedback. She spoke of how she almost got lost in the reading and the disorganizing of my paragraphs.
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